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I'm looking for help with my story.

Let me give you the details. A few years back I started to write a story which can be found here: Gallery   (read the descriptions, please.)
As you can see I've gotten better with my writing but, I'm still learning and I've decided to stop at the last part, because nearly a year ago I found out that it needed a proper beginning.
So, I've decided that the gallery link above is sort of like a beta version of my story. So, basically, I need help. Like critique, grammar or spelling check would help me further my writing allot. Please, help if you can. =)

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Sophia Rose Ref by goliath18
Sophia Rose Ref
Sophia Rose is a witch just like her friends Gwendolyn, Mona and willhermina. They all call each other sisters, Witch sisters.

Sophia is the leader of the witch sisters. She assumed the role after their previous witch sister went away to have a family of her own.
Since that day, Sophia has been tough and stern on the witch sisters especially Willhermina but, over time she became kinder to them all. She also makes sure everyone does they're fair share of chores around the mansion.

Sophia enchants items and clothing to make sure that no one can bother them or ruin their clothes during a fight. She often wears many different dress and only wears some of it inside the mansion, before she goes out she changes into her battle dress rather quickly, much to the witch sisters surprise and often wonder how she does it.

Sophia is also a seamstress. It took her a very long time to become one, but when you're a ghost type you have nothing but time. She often makes dresses for herself, her witch sisters and for Grace as well.

Sophia hates it when her witch sisters start a fight and make a mess of things or are rude to her or others and she can't help but lose her calm and get angry at anyone. Which results in the witch sisters becoming scared of her or at rare times for them to stand their ground only to back away later and avoid saying things to her.

Sophia has quite the sweet tooth and the witch sisters can either use candy to calm her down(she rarely refuses and if she does refuse....yikes) or to bribe her with favors, depending on what that favor is. Whether the favor is helping with something the others can't do alone, singing or a promise to not get mad(rarely works) she will do it for candy.


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Sophia Rose copyright by me. :icongoliath18:

Mismagius copyright by pokemon copyright by nintendo.

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Mona Lovel Ref by goliath18
Mona Lovel Ref
Mona Lovel is a witch just like her friends Gwendolyn, Sophia and Willhermina. They all call each other sisters, Witch sisters.

Mona Loves to read and learn a lot she collect books of all kinds the involve magic, potions, history, supernaturals, witchcraft and more.
She mostly stays in the soundproofed library in the mansion, where there's peach and quiet and away from the loud noises and explosions coming from the potion room.

Mona also enjoys listening to music. She often offers her witch sisters favors like chores, assistance with their work, getting them their favorite dinner, candy and desserts when they are too busy. In return she asks them to play musical instruments or sing when she's reading in her library.

Ever since Grace moved in with them, Mona is constantly surprised, shocked and frightened by Grace's sudden arrivals into the library due to her vampire powers and abilities. Even though Grace didn't mean to frighten her and constantly apologizes for her actions Mona still thinks that Grace should be wearing a bell around her neck.

Mona usually gets angry and frustrated when someone (Gwendolyn but, you didn't hear it from me) messes with her books. This results in ear deafening screeches and a chase scene through the mansion(literally). Which usually takes Sophia and Willhermina a couple of hours to stop but, with Grace's help under a half hour.



Art by :iconshalonesk:

Mona Lovel copyright by me. :icongoliath18:

Mismagius copyright by pokemon copyright by nintendo.

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Gwendolyn Summer Ref by goliath18
Gwendolyn Summer Ref
Gwendolyn Summer is a witch just like her friends Mona, Sophia and Willhermina. They all call each other sisters, Witch sisters.

Gwendolyn loves to gather plants, herbs and other ingredients for potion making and cauldron brewing. She often goes to her hidden garden far behind the Mansion and the dead forest. Thanks to Mona and her witch sisters, the garden is protected by many spells and illusions so that no one except them and those wearing special made jewelry can find and enter this garden.

Gwendolyn is often found in the potions room in the mansion where she is always brewing new kinds of potions and writing them down in her notebooks in another more secure room. Safe from any failed attempts and explosion.

Gwendolyn can play the piano very well and often plays in the library for Mona when she's reading. Sometimes out of kindness, others times when Mona offers favors(though Gwendolyn sees them as bribes) and sometimes as an apology for upsetting her.

Gwendolyn often gets angry when someone insults her about being the shortest of the witch sisters and results in a attack first and screech later scenario.

Gwendolyn often loves a joke or twenty and also likes to scare others a few times especially Mona, but when she tries to scare Sophia or Willhermina, she is often met with no reactions or an angry outburst. Which results in her not scaring anyone for a month or two.





Art by :iconshalonesk:

Gwendolyn Summer copyright by me. :icongoliath18:

Mismagius copyright by pokemon copyright by nintendo.

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Willhermina Minerva Blackheart Ref Formal by goliath18
Willhermina Minerva Blackheart Ref Formal
Willhermina's victorian era formal/battle dress.



Art by :iconshalonesk:

Willhermina Minerva Blackheart copyright by me. :icongoliath18:

Gardevoir copyright by pokemon copyright by nintendo.

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Willhermina Minerva Blackheart Ref Casual by goliath18
Willhermina Minerva Blackheart Ref Casual
A long overdue ref of Willhermina for future commissions.

This is Willhermina's normal/battle clothes.




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Gardevoir copyright by pokemon copyright by nintendo.

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